'renewal'

bolts of thunder light up the sky splash of colour visible as rain fall rain supply its own kind of music lyrics the trees sway and dance to as flowers smile after months of drought one thing on nature's mind is renewal it is time to enjoy every facet... 03/05/2011

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James Fraser

Date: 5/7/2011 1:42:00 PM

The rains in fall on the Serengeti lands, their impending approach is in natures plans. From barren to lush, brings this droplets of pure. Seasonal they are, but will it remain her renewing cure. Terrific poetry Wilma, I love it....:)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2011 11:01:00 AM

Throughout this poem I sense the sounds of thunderstorms as well as the soft percusionary sounds of rain hitting various objects. The flowers smiling as the earth is newly splashed with colors is gorgeous. Enjoyed every facet of this poem. Great poem and nice form chosen too. Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/5/2011 1:29:00 PM

Pure excellence in this piece... awake and refreshed is the feeling I get... Such amazing work for The other "amazing crazy" lol luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2011 9:32:00 PM

oo.. good luck in the contest... sure enjoyed... take care... and i asume its moring in your part of the world... bye,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 6:36:00 PM

What a perspective to write on the theme as you like it with a pleasant aspect of the nature, Wilma

James Foulk

Date: 5/4/2011 11:52:00 AM

a very fine refreshing piece of creative poetry, that touches the inner soul.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 5/3/2011 8:11:00 PM

Love it Sweet. it reinds me of the rainy season when you can smell it in the air. Africa the best. XXX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/3/2011 4:47:00 PM

Brilliant description of the lightning and an uplifting message about the renewal rain affords to all of the Earth. Excellent, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 2:11:00 PM

ahhh, enjoy every facet. VERY nicely said, wilma. A sweet poem on spring!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/3/2011 12:30:00 PM

wonderful poem,Wilma.Is it raining too much there?Send some this way---kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2011 7:37:00 AM

Renewal is like a breath of fresh air Wilma and these lines indicate time for renewed energies as Spring is here with all the facets in your lovely poetry .. enjoyed my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 4:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Wilma. I will be back again soon to read more. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol