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Remove the Pain

Covered in road kill Winners and losers Confusion breaks me free I let the books fall So it could breathe Below the surface I let the words Expand my mind I retrieved the page That allowed peace Burned, what had already been burned Remember my name Full moon whispers light My song My song dancing shadows Forever sings Forever Sings 01/20/12

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/12/2012 11:36:00 AM

just dropping by to say...you are a good poet my friend..keep it up! (^_^)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/21/2012 2:48:00 PM

Sounds confusing at first but worth spending the time to find the depths you probe. Deep thought Jimbo, to be enjoyed for sure.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/21/2012 2:02:00 PM

I must say dear poet; this write, if'n it was possible to do so, would go on top of my list of favorite poems ! Into mine favz it goes sir, and two; you are here by listed as a favorite poet of mine ! ("remember my name") This write James, has excited the poetry genre of art for me today; one hundred fold ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend ! Much love, james

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/21/2012 7:08:00 AM

This is so deep Jimbo! I really like it b/c it can be seen a few different ways :) Have a great weekend!