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Remembering when

The Old Tree Fort I remember when.... we looked upon a sea of brown of housetops where we knew the names of families up the street and down We would spy and laugh, with reckless shame I remember when... that sagging door in our knotted box was much too squat for Mary Sue To squeeze her bouncy redhead locks she had to bend her frame in two I remember when... time would cast a spell, so heaven sent for kids like me, who came and went That knotty tree fort, where hours spent was a Land of Oz, we'll not forget

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:08:00 PM
    Another beautiful poem from you Carrie.Lovely read.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:55:00 AM
    how sweet the way you focused on one small thing but it was so significant in your young life. Well done. I like the way you did this contest.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 4:51:00 PM
    what great memories TFS and congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:46:00 AM
    I like this very much. It is good to have memories. Congrats. on your win.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:14:00 AM
    love this nostalgic gem, Carrie - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:45:00 AM
    this is wonderful! it really brings that tree house to life...

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Wow Carrie, i'm in a reminiscing mood at the moment, you being here on soup when i first came on board nearly 4 years ago, i do not see alot of you, but one thing for sure, you are an amazing poet, and i've just loved everything i've read of yours,, include this beauty, so to that list i will add also.... you truly are an inspiration....

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:56:00 PM
    Very sweet, Carrie! Nice work...jimbo