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Remembering When

I remember when...
My hands were too tiny
but the sky was nearer,
today I have grown up hands
but the sky is too far.

I remember when....
I was not tall enough
to peek into the robin's nest,
today though I am taller
the robin has changed its address.

I remember when....
Days were so colourful
with butterflies all around,
now the days are much faded
and those butterflies are not found.

I remember when.....
I disliked many things of life
and wanted to change it a lot,
today I know it is too late now
and those were all my absurd thoughts!


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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:02:00 AM
    I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and I'm sure everyone can relate to the difference in how things were then and now. Such a good write and very profound.

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:56:00 AM
    It is such a beauty....Loved it=)=)=)

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:03:00 PM
    just revisiting this one and hoping it wins well for you. How is your week going, Kash?

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:15:00 PM
    I absolutely love your childhood memories in this gem Kash. Beautiful piece. How you doing? ;)

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:21:00 AM
    NOt absurd, but wonderful poetry!! kash, I think yours is one of the best in the contest but a few of the lines did not rhyme for me. I hope that gets overlooked because what you were saying in some of your stanzas was pure genius!

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 9:48:00 AM
    passing by to ring the alarm, more? ;) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:08:00 AM
    This is a very thought provoking write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:39:00 PM
    finally, you are reborn with this sentimental piece so uniquely created.. so lovely, kashi bud...yes!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Well you got a smile out of me Kash and that was a treat, have a great day xxx

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 10:40:00 AM
    Kash, this is terrific...nothing absurd about this poem.