Remembering Still

~*~ remembering still, the little girl that was, so lost, lonely and me, years ago . . . . on the dappled porch, humming songs to myself, all my dolls pretty, while, birds twitter . . . china cups for all, filled with tea not too hot, wearing grandma's old dress, make pretend . . . I tell them stories, all the pretty dolls, just, whispering so softly, my secrets . . . raven hair hanging, in a tangled sweet mess, the dolls all quiet, while, my tears fall . . . . ______________________ May 9, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Melancholy/remembering still Copyright Protected, ID 05-476-816-09 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Date: 5/11/2013 9:29:00 PM
Constance :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 5/11/2013 3:28:00 PM
another real beauty here, my friend
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Date: 5/10/2013 9:25:00 AM
I'm anxious to try this new form. But who can top your melancholy memories? (Reminding me of my own childhood with my dollies and tiny china tea cups)?
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:22:00 PM
This is another great example of your Melancholy form! I truly loved reading this masterful and lovely poem this evening! What an amazing piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:08:00 PM
Check out my new contest called Melancholy Memory using this form I created, 35 entries, deadline June 10, constance
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