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Remember the First Time

For Joe Flach's contest "FIRST TIME" _______________________ Remember the first time our eyes met I couldn't help but see your graceful face, I wanted to ask if you were from heaven But I was squandered from nine to eleven. Remember the first time we held hands The touch of your palm was enough to excite me, Lost and found the feeling was alive I bet you witnessed what I describe. Remember the first time I kissed you Time went flying, Our lips were sore, Kiss and tell they say I was so sure It was you, yes you Whom I was searching for And then..... It was the first time we made love, I caressed your body your angelic skin, I held you so gently your eyes lost in mine, I held you so closely our love lost in time. _____________________ I was inspired to write this piece from my poem "ANGEL"

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Date: 7/25/2010 2:34:00 AM
Outstandingly beautiful a lovely poem to read and read. Great write in very soothing words.Congrats on winning the contest. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:38:00 AM
so beautiful, blessings x
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Oscar on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:03:00 AM
It is timeless- sweet write- Congrats to you Oscar
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:07:00 PM
Very sweet, congratulations on your HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful piece and congratulations Oscar :) rgds WN
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Oscar. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:11:00 PM
OK great now did u check out Paula's new one with the Four Sentences.. its fairly easy but challenging.. give it a go my friend Oscar.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:29:00 PM
Congrats Oscar on your HM in Joe's contest with this wonderful write and win.. now enjoy your very special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:31:00 AM
Yes I agree with Celene, on the bottom of me. This is a wonderful entry on a lot of good felt first time moments. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, have anice one,..Sidney Lee Ann
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:45:00 AM
Wow.......So beautiful..It must have been an angel playing with your thoughts,to write such a beauty......Celene
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