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Remember the First Time

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Remember the First Time

For Joe Flach's contest
"FIRST TIME"
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Remember the first time
our eyes met
I couldn't help but see
your graceful face,
I wanted to ask
if you were from heaven
But I was squandered
from nine to eleven.

Remember the first time
we held hands
The touch of your palm
was enough to excite me,
Lost and found
the feeling was alive
I bet you witnessed
what I describe.

Remember the first time
I kissed you
Time went flying,
Our lips were sore,
Kiss and tell they say
I was so sure
It was you, yes you
Whom I was searching for

And then.....

It was the first time
we made love,
I caressed your body
your angelic skin,
I held you so gently
your eyes lost in mine,
I held you so closely
our love lost in time.

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I was inspired to write this piece from my poem "ANGEL"

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  1. Date: 7/25/2010 2:34:00 AM
    Outstandingly beautiful a lovely poem to read and read. Great write in very soothing words.Congrats on winning the contest. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 12:38:00 AM
    so beautiful, blessings x

  1. Date: 6/28/2010 9:41:00 AM
    Congratulations Oscar on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 3:03:00 AM
    It is timeless- sweet write- Congrats to you Oscar

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 8:07:00 PM
    Very sweet, congratulations on your HM. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 1:56:00 PM
    This is a beautiful piece and congratulations Oscar :) rgds WN

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Oscar. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 8:11:00 PM
    OK great now did u check out Paula's new one with the Four Sentences.. its fairly easy but challenging.. give it a go my friend Oscar.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 6:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 4:29:00 PM
    Congrats Oscar on your HM in Joe's contest with this wonderful write and win.. now enjoy your very special honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 5:31:00 AM
    Yes I agree with Celene, on the bottom of me. This is a wonderful entry on a lot of good felt first time moments. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, have anice one,..Sidney Lee Ann

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 12:45:00 AM
    Wow.......So beautiful..It must have been an angel playing with your thoughts,to write such a beauty......Celene