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Release Me Over the Cliff

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Release Me Over the Cliff

Release Me Over the Cliff

Let me fall into this salted sea let me fall into this world I loved so dearly.Why why should I end it here why not let me fall into this earthly salted sea and feel free and opened like I did before I took over a earthly body.there is nothing there is space here I want to feel the wind for in this world i could never find what i search so longlying for,something that would change my life in some dreaming state.You shouldn't have on a dream this flavour which is ever so bitter I want to hold it until the sweetness finally comes.It has never crossed this dreamed stated mind that I was free that this salted sea is where I put an end to this fruitless search,but am I fighting myself into a great fall into that darker form of my very being? How long will I hold everything inside until it all becomes lose ? This game has lost it spark it has lost it joyful beinning it has lost me? Shouldn't we waste time on such a game this game of life? I will not cry I will not bed nor will I plead for I only ask that you release me  over the cliff into this sea I so disered into the earth from wince I came release me from this game that a soul must play over and over until it finds it perfect dream,so i day unto you release me relase me over this cliff into the ocean.

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