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Do you know how it Feels?
When Rejection Reveals.
It always Hurt to Know,
but you have to Accept.

My Heart Aches whenever you Reject me,
Whenever they look at me Straight in the Eye,
I always think they Despise me.

I tried,I tried my Best,
I provoked myself to do things I can`t,
I Tried to prove,
That I am better than YOU!

But no,No I can`t,
If this Rejection would be a Disease,
I would be Dead right now.

My Heart have been always Fragile,
I have been always Sensitive.
That`s why I always Wished,
that Rejection was Siezed

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Powerful, yet saddened breakdowns. Kudos to you for this expressive writing.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:17:00 AM
    I know how you feel in this poem right now Chelsea! The simple and complex feelings of being rejected have rolled through me like a full on locomotive and it hurts me everytime rejection comes my way. I have a big heart and to see it get torn out of my chest and stomped on with rejection hurts. I know your feelings Chelsea! Great poem brought a vase of mixed emotions to me and a tear in my eye! I love the poem! Keep on doing what you are doing Chelsea! Check out some of my poems, xoxo :) huggs!!