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Below is the poem entitled Reinvented which was written by poet Dan Maclellan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You can't shake this, bend or break this.
Write these endings, life's contention.
Breaks my spirit and make's me fear it.
Spinning dials, my lifes on trial.

Finding confidence, feeding  ignorance.
Find the reason. for your treasons
life it seems to be ,tragic apathy.
Its my own believing, is this my own demon?

Fearing things around , like I'm trapped and bound .
Give myself the slip, broken by razor whips.
Open my eyes, hiding inner lies.
Awaken my soul, buried in a hole.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2011 7:07:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol