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Regrettably Stagnant

stagnant I lay…
zealously yearning 
yet reluctant to play

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/16/2012 4:06:00 AM

An excellent haiku by you Natalie.Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:53:00 PM

Natalie, what an excellent way to do a haiku. it's not concrete, but the IDEAS are so COOL, we cannot help but be impressed. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2012 3:59:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2012 2:05:00 PM

What a thought provoking little poem! Well done, Natalie!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2012 1:50:00 PM

congrats Natalie on a brilliant win for quality lines of poetic art luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2012 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 6:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Natalie. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2011 11:36:00 PM

Good thinking here.Yes, all of us perhaps feel this time to time.Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2011 11:35:00 PM

HI, Natalie. it's good to see you on the winners' list. I sure remember this one! Congratulations.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/8/2011 4:48:00 PM

congrats on your win, I think we all feel like this from time to time...the rhyme works well, who says haiku shouldn't rhyme?

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 4:30:00 PM

Sounds melancholy. Congrats on your win,Natalie! Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2011 4:01:00 PM

awww this doesn't sound happy!! too bad I couldn't tickle YOU! Congrad's Light & Love [I know I should talk..but I'm perking up!]

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:19:00 PM

Oh shucks, I feel this way at times, too Natalie! You sure brought that across in your haiku-- Super congrats on your win and thank you for dropping by my poems :) also sorry i wasn't able to come up with something for your contest-- I had drowning in chocolate in mind but couldn't write it :(...

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2011 12:24:00 PM

Natalie congrats on your win, bet this is the opposite of you..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/6/2011 4:47:00 AM

This is really wonderful. Natalie.. It makes one stop and think. And I think I do this far too much. Fear is my reluctance. Thank you Natalie for my placement in your Die A Fun Death Contest. That was for sure a fun contest to enter.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 8:09:00 AM

i know what you mean - and really people could interpret this in so many different areas of their lives. Sometimes I'm like this in a social setting, though sitting instead of lying down. I love how this rhymes :) great flow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 9:16:00 PM

It sounds like you are some instrument. So it is like a cool personification, natalie. Good one!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/2/2011 4:47:00 PM

You - stagnant, me - stagnant too! :0) Great free Haiku here, dear Natalie...I watched your Youtube video. Are you enjoying your new car? It must've been so exciting to be on TV and win! What was the process though? Did you start in Las Vegas?

Jack Horne

Date: 12/2/2011 2:27:00 PM

I love this witty piece, Natalie. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )

Edward Mccormick

Date: 12/2/2011 10:07:00 AM

Fabulous! I love that it's only 2 lines, and I am totally enamoured with the rhyme in it... You really are a Rogue Rhymer, Natalie. Bravo, Viva Regrettably Stagnant! ~ECMc

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2011 7:27:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed..Thanks for the visit to my blog..My spirit bubbles over with youth waiting to be freed from the disabled weighty earthly tabernacle that holds it down..Thanks again for the visit..I hope that you have entered my contest "Song Of Solomon"..Just a few notes to read to do an entry..Sara