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Refused

I walked with scents and beauty Redwoods, lilies, pines, morning glory's Camped in darkness amist shinging stars Just for future stories Water gushing with force Shooting with grace off beaten rocks Crisp air for a last breath A door to which I knock Please let me enter I feel my deeds are done Refuse me not for I'm tired Of the rising sun The doors stayed closed I'm ignored yet once again Unknown if for kindness Maybe I need one more sin

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Michael Jordan

Date: 7/27/2008 5:02:00 AM

Teresa - this poem is well written and very beautiful yet so sad - In the past I often felt the same way - My life was nothing but pain and heartache (Sad part was it was all my bad) when I handed it all over to God - I then paroled from prison for the last time and by Gods grace I got my family back, no longer do I cook or use drugs and my life is blessed - I hope that you find peace with-in - blessings

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/27/2008 2:21:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in the beginning. You seem so troubled. I am wishing you love and hope and the beginning of new and wonderful things. Love, Shar

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/26/2008 10:02:00 PM

remember god loves you,talk to him sometime,then write