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REFLECTION

**REFLECTION**

Running through a wheat dream
Clear skies, worms and flies, my face cries
Surrounded by silver streams
I stumbled into a valley where sleepness never dies
A manger on fire, burning embryo of lies
no time for final good-bye's

Waking up alone in the middle of a field
Rain falls from the sky, to bless my soul
Above the silver lining of mirrored clouds
I lay a bouquet of flowers on your grave
Angered by the thought of my birth
Where has my salvation gone?

Rescued by the hand, of the one I can not see
Tormented in life's final step 
Silent mistreated never understand
Arid of hate dooming everyday
Something evil ruins the last hold of my hand
My mouth hit by the door, when I pray
A ricochet shot when my life was revealed 
Fallen in and out, after unwanted betrayal tounges 
Alone with my reflection is where I stand
Broken Mirrors, 
the only thing I see!
7 years of current bad luck.

*SKAT* 

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  1. Date: 8/12/2015 3:03:00 AM
    I simply love these words awesome :) Thank you for always leaving nice remarks on my words :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2015 8:38:00 AM
    Thought-provoking and full of images that can mean many different things to different readers, even to the same reader after many readings. Congratulations on such vividly written, imaginative writing!

  1. Date: 7/15/2015 5:18:00 AM
    Hi SKAT! Saw you online and was reminded to check your latest but was brought here instead. I can see why this is voted your best. Personally I'm not into dark writes but this pulls at me. You have have painted an awesome imagery to describe the whirl of emotions here. Great write! Thanks once again by the way, for being the person that you are. We are the better poets because of it. hugs!

  1. Date: 7/2/2015 4:37:00 PM
    Lovely reflection...

  1. Date: 6/29/2015 11:48:00 AM
    wow is the word I can think of now :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2015 11:02:00 PM
    good poem

  1. Date: 6/1/2015 6:40:00 AM
    Dear SCAT_A Here is adding to my previous comment:Adding to a comment:"The Egyptian pyramids were: "originally covered with casing stones (made of highly polished limestone). These casing stones reflected the sun’s light and made the pyramid shine like a jewel. They are no longer present being used by Arabs to build mosques after an earthquake in the 14th century loosened many of them. It has been calculated that the original pyramid with its casing stones would act like gigantic mirrors and reflect light so powerful that it would be visible from the moon as a shining star on earth. Appropriately, the ancient Egyptians called the Great Pyramid “Ikhet”, meaning the “Glorious Light”. How these blocks were transported and assembled into the pyramid is still a mystery." " – http://www.gizapyramid.com/general.htm SO _Shine on*: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KusVF8mFvI4

  1. Date: 5/21/2015 10:40:00 PM
    Your poetry is profound. Good work.

  1. Date: 5/21/2015 6:14:00 AM
    So intense are the lines that one has to return over and over again to a rewarding appreciation of the poem.

  1. Date: 5/16/2015 1:14:00 PM
    Wonderful Poem, so conflicted. Life does not always deal us an easy hand. Enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 5/12/2015 2:40:00 PM
    Thinking positive instead of negative makes all the difference..Not a broken mirror means 7 years bad luck but what good can come from getting a new mirror..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by and reading one of my older ones..Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2015 9:23:00 AM
    We still can not understand really what is infact the mirror. The light is refracted and reflected repeatedly in perspective and lens of the eye. Why we love to look in the mirror? I think we're trying to understand themselves in such a way, to understand what our soul and that we ourselves really. Meeting with a stranger is refracted light of our soul in the aura of the man and a so-called movement of the soul. The fine works of Oscar Wilde "The Picture of Dorian Gray" is the theme explored it. The great film director Andrei Tarkovsky regard to this in his most famous film "The Mirror" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Yn9q25NWAw

    Belinsky Avatar Serge Belinsky
    Date: 6/1/2015 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Adding to a comment:"The Egyptian pyramids were: "originally covered with casing stones (made of highly polished limestone). These casing stones reflected the sun’s light and made the pyramid shine like a jewel. They are no longer present being used by Arabs to build mosques after an earthquake in the 14th century loosened many of them. It has been calculated that the original pyramid with its casing stones would act like gigantic mirrors and reflect light so powerful that it would be visible from the moon as a shining star on earth. Appropriately, the ancient Egyptians called the Great Pyramid “Ikhet”, meaning the “Glorious Light”. How these blocks were transported and assembled into the pyramid is still a mystery." " – http://www.gizapyramid.com/general.htm
  1. Date: 5/5/2015 10:29:00 PM
    I fell in love with this poem!!! especially the mirror part!!!

  1. Date: 5/2/2015 4:36:00 AM
    This is amazing !

  1. Date: 5/1/2015 11:43:00 PM
    Beautiful work Skat A!!!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2015 8:53:00 PM
    I love this poem

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 2:06:00 AM
    This poem is so awesome. I loved reading this.

    Das Avatar Nandita Das
    Date: 4/27/2015 2:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A favorite .
  1. Date: 4/26/2015 3:23:00 PM
    Very emotional...beautiful

  1. Date: 3/26/2015 8:16:00 PM
    Alone with my own reflection is where I stand - great

  1. Date: 3/25/2015 6:10:00 AM
    an awesome pen..lol

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