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I am running through a wheat dream
Open skies, worms and flies, my face cries
Surrounded by a  silver stream
I stumbled into the valley where sleep-ness never dies
A manger on fire, burning embryo of lies
no one said their final good-bye's

I wake up alone in the middle of a field
Rain falling from the sky blessing my soul
Above the silver lining of a mirrored cloud
I place a bouquet of flowers on your grave
Angered by the thought of my birth
Afterlife are we still saved?

Rescued by the hand, of him I can not see
Happy and tormented in life's final way
Silent mistreated never understand
A rid of hate dooming everyday
Something so evil ruins the last holding hand
My mouth hit by the door, on my knees when I pray
A ricochet shoot, when he revealed my plan
Fallen in and out after an unwanted betrayal
Alone with my own reflection is where I stand
Broken Mirrors, 
the only thing I see!
7 years of bad luck.


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  1. Date: 1/26/2015 1:40:00 AM
    a nice poem for a difficult journey...great!

  1. Date: 12/16/2014 5:29:00 AM
    well put, well articulated, perfect choice of words.

  1. Date: 12/8/2014 5:00:00 AM
    Powerful bit of imagery here. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/29/2014 10:53:00 PM
    oh my goodness.. this is perfect. i read a quote once: "poetry speaks through desire" you hit the bullseye. this makes me feel something deep inside and thats beautiful.

  1. Date: 11/17/2014 10:13:00 PM
    This is what poetry is all about... Extracting the deepest darkest pained parts of our souls and painting something beautiful with the mud

  1. Date: 10/14/2014 12:55:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem. I really enjoyed the imagery of wheat fields and silver dreams.

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:14:00 PM
    This poem is so deep but beautiful at the same time. I love it..... ^_^

  1. Date: 8/28/2014 12:49:00 AM
    Your poetry is very deep, and emotional; I can feel the passion in your words; for they are very heart felt, and could come only from knowing, and feeling a deep lost, I pray for you as you journey through your life, I hope you are blessed and highly favored.

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 7:59:00 AM
    beautiful. there is not a word that can be added or a word that can taken away. a woderful piece of poetry.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:13:00 AM
    this was really the work of art i am taken aback....

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 3:46:00 AM
    Hi SKAT Once in a while a poem comes along that I wish I had the ability to write myself because it is so good and stand alone and this is one of those brilliant really enjoyed it. Cheers Chris

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
    Hi SKAT, That was intense. I'm still trying to catch my breath... Great elements and reflections. Keep up the good work, Regards, Earl

  1. Date: 4/12/2014 9:19:00 PM
    WOW!! I think Reflection is my favorite !! I really loved it. I can feel betrayal!! WOW just WOW!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2014 10:13:00 PM
    What engaging imagery. What a force this poem is.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:17:00 PM
    This is what I'm talking about SKAT :~~~ A ricochet shoot, when he revealed my plan.~~~~right there the readers thoughts are ricocheting in their heads!~~Your holding us hostage until your done!

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:54:00 PM
    I loved it. I wonder I have written poem like yours.

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:50:00 AM
    Nice :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 7:50:00 PM
    This is very riveting Skat. I love the tone.....your friend Tim

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 12:00:00 AM
    † I Love You Baby. Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's Feature, My Love, Forever, John

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 5:04:00 PM
    SKAT This is an interesting and unique write. Every line is filled with so much power and feeling. You captivated the reader from beginning to end. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Movie Reality poem.