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REFLECTION

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REFLECTION

**REFLECTION**

I am running through a wheat dream
Open skies, worms and flies, my face cries
Surrounded by a  silver stream
I stumbled into the valley where sleep-ness never dies
A manger on fire, burning embryo of lies
no one said their final good-bye's

I wake up alone in the middle of a field
Rain falling from the sky blessing my soul
Above the silver lining of a mirrored cloud
I place a bouquet of flowers on your grave
Angered by the thought of my birth
Afterlife are we still saved?

Rescued by the hand, of him I can not see
Happy and tormented in life's final way
Silent mistreated never understand
A rid of hate dooming everyday
Something so evil ruins the last holding hand
My mouth hit by the door, on my knees when I pray
A ricochet shoot, when he revealed my plan
Fallen in and out after an unwanted betrayal
Alone with my own reflection is where I stand
Broken Mirrors, 
the only thing I see!
7 years of bad luck.

*SKAT*

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  1. Date: 2/20/2015 5:02:00 AM
    "Hey...your poems are amazing! After your encouraging words I thought of dropping by and now I'm glad I did it. Its wonderful to read such poems with deep emotions in such simple words. Great job. :-) "

  1. Date: 1/26/2015 1:40:00 AM
    a nice poem for a difficult journey...great!

  1. Date: 12/16/2014 5:29:00 AM
    well put, well articulated, perfect choice of words.

  1. Date: 12/8/2014 5:00:00 AM
    Powerful bit of imagery here. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/29/2014 10:53:00 PM
    oh my goodness.. this is perfect. i read a quote once: "poetry speaks through desire" you hit the bullseye. this makes me feel something deep inside and thats beautiful.

  1. Date: 11/17/2014 10:13:00 PM
    This is what poetry is all about... Extracting the deepest darkest pained parts of our souls and painting something beautiful with the mud

  1. Date: 10/14/2014 12:55:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem. I really enjoyed the imagery of wheat fields and silver dreams.

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:14:00 PM
    This poem is so deep but beautiful at the same time. I love it..... ^_^

  1. Date: 8/28/2014 12:49:00 AM
    Your poetry is very deep, and emotional; I can feel the passion in your words; for they are very heart felt, and could come only from knowing, and feeling a deep lost, I pray for you as you journey through your life, I hope you are blessed and highly favored.

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 7:59:00 AM
    beautiful. there is not a word that can be added or a word that can taken away. a woderful piece of poetry.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:13:00 AM
    this was really the work of art i am taken aback....

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 3:46:00 AM
    Hi SKAT Once in a while a poem comes along that I wish I had the ability to write myself because it is so good and stand alone and this is one of those brilliant really enjoyed it. Cheers Chris

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
    Hi SKAT, That was intense. I'm still trying to catch my breath... Great elements and reflections. Keep up the good work, Regards, Earl

  1. Date: 4/12/2014 9:19:00 PM
    WOW!! I think Reflection is my favorite !! I really loved it. I can feel betrayal!! WOW just WOW!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2014 10:13:00 PM
    What engaging imagery. What a force this poem is.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:17:00 PM
    This is what I'm talking about SKAT :~~~ A ricochet shoot, when he revealed my plan.~~~~right there the readers thoughts are ricocheting in their heads!~~Your holding us hostage until your done!

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:54:00 PM
    I loved it. I wonder I have written poem like yours.

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:50:00 AM
    Nice :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 7:50:00 PM
    This is very riveting Skat. I love the tone.....your friend Tim

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 12:00:00 AM
    † I Love You Baby. Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's Feature, My Love, Forever, John

    Rhinem Avatar Johnny Rhinem
    Date: 1/24/2014 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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