Reeling In Motion

I twist evermore past a cotillion of meteors
Spreading plumes across unknown rhythm;
A mad swivel with myself, thrilling my essence 
In a hanging motion of a dip…I find myself alone
on the floor; my hem gathering night’s stardust.

And the saxophonist gazes at me from afar, 
he smiles,
then disappears.


Dancing With Contest
Sponsor: Giorgo V.
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
great poem congrats on win Shadow x smiles
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2013 1:39:00 AM
fantastic poem..Feel myself dancing to the rhythm ..Congratulations on your grand win friend Nette. Cheers!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful and melodious hun. Many warm congrats for this win.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 8:22:00 PM
A magical dance of beauty. Wonderful write and win! Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 5:40:00 PM
This left me swwooning. Congratulations Nette.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 5:16:00 PM
lovely in every way.... congrats... LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2013 6:53:00 AM
Its great to read. the dance, the affluence in words and a professional greatness. the right word to admire is "awesome".I say this powerfully "awesome"
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2013 9:24:00 PM
I love how this is filled with vibrant descriptive language! Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2013 8:08:00 AM
Like, the charm of music infecting mind and body, a very real presence. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
Amazing poetry!You are so different from rest of the poets!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 PM
How they sway unto the unforeseen horizons. Fantastic!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 11:25:00 AM
Hello Nette...its been awhile my dear friend..This is a spectacular piece written here. I felt as if I was there along side of you..witnessing you dance the night away..what incredible images displayed here..hugs :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 11:13:00 AM
I just love the dancing moves that you exhibit within this striking write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and fascinating poem this afternoon! You have masterfully crafted a glorious piece! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter