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Below is the poem entitled REELING IN MOTION which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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She twirls alone on the floor as ambient songs fling with the wisp of mambo notes… this older lady with sequins on her hair— luminescent arms quite fluid-- ruffles around like a moth in a trance; her glow dark and brewed by some potion: flamed toes pivoting on embers of heat and glazed stones. There I am, inhabiting her freestyle grooves as my body moves toward her like burnt sting. And we pulsate without a compass, reeling our strides higher than anklets of evening… and we dance, we dance while our bones make love with the moon, climbing into the pole of beats until glitters in our eyes meet with kohl of dusk’s thrist hiding nothing. I twist evermore past a cotillion of meteors Spreading plumes across unknown rhythm; A mad swivel with myself, thrilling my essence In a hanging motion of a dip…I find myself alone on the floor; my hem gathering night’s stardust. And the lady gazes at me from afar, she smiles, then disappears. Dancing With Contest Sponsor: Giorgo V. by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
    great poem congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 1:39:00 AM
    fantastic poem..Feel myself dancing to the rhythm ..Congratulations on your grand win friend Nette. Cheers!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Beautiful and melodious hun. Many warm congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:22:00 PM
    A magical dance of beauty. Wonderful write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:40:00 PM
    This left me swwooning. Congratulations Nette.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:16:00 PM
    lovely in every way.... congrats... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Can't stop dancing while reading Great write. Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Its great to read. the dance, the affluence in words and a professional greatness. the right word to admire is "awesome".I say this powerfully "awesome"

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:19:00 AM
    Nette, your mirror is smiling at your beauty, congratulations my dear xxx

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 9:24:00 PM
    I love how this is filled with vibrant descriptive language! Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Like, the charm of music infecting mind and body, a very real presence. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Amazing poetry!You are so different from rest of the poets!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 PM
    How they sway unto the unforeseen horizons. Fantastic!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Hello Nette...its been awhile my dear friend..This is a spectacular piece written here. I felt as if I was there along side of you..witnessing you dance the night away..what incredible images displayed here..hugs :)

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:13:00 AM
    I just love the dancing moves that you exhibit within this striking write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and fascinating poem this afternoon! You have masterfully crafted a glorious piece! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!