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Reeling In Motion

I twist evermore past a cotillion of meteors Spreading plumes across unknown rhythm; A mad swivel with myself, thrilling my essence In a hanging motion of a dip…I find myself alone on the floor; my hem gathering night’s stardust. And the saxophonist gazes at me from afar, he smiles, then disappears. Dancing With Contest Sponsor: Giorgo V. by nette onclaud

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Date: 7/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
great poem congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/18/2013 1:39:00 AM
fantastic poem..Feel myself dancing to the rhythm ..Congratulations on your grand win friend Nette. Cheers!!
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Date: 7/17/2013 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful and melodious hun. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/17/2013 8:22:00 PM
A magical dance of beauty. Wonderful write and win! Hugs
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:40:00 PM
This left me swwooning. Congratulations Nette.
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:16:00 PM
lovely in every way.... congrats... LINDA
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Date: 7/17/2013 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:53:00 AM
Its great to read. the dance, the affluence in words and a professional greatness. the right word to admire is "awesome".I say this powerfully "awesome"
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Date: 7/16/2013 9:24:00 PM
I love how this is filled with vibrant descriptive language! Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/30/2013 8:08:00 AM
Like, the charm of music infecting mind and body, a very real presence. Love, daver
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
Amazing poetry!You are so different from rest of the poets!!
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 PM
How they sway unto the unforeseen horizons. Fantastic!
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:25:00 AM
Hello Nette...its been awhile my dear friend..This is a spectacular piece written here. I felt as if I was there along side of you..witnessing you dance the night away..what incredible images displayed here..hugs :)
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:13:00 AM
I just love the dancing moves that you exhibit within this striking write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and fascinating poem this afternoon! You have masterfully crafted a glorious piece! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!
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