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Redemption

In the moon’s absence I chase a curtain of light. Although the dark terrain’s uncertain I run with a canning jar its lid poked with holes to let the light breathe. While my father watches I fly. With diligence and enthusiasm I continue, even when the light scatters, until I catch a spot of light to hold and place in a jar to contain its afterglow. To catch a star, I think, to catch a dream, and I recall my father’s advice to reach for a constellation. To touch Heaven, I yearn. I watch the glow until it fades and find joy in something simple as it enriches a moment in a short span of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2012 4:48:00 AM
What a beautiful heart felt poem. To me I was running into the sky trying to chase the moon, with a literal jar in my hand with holes in the top! I have Asperger autism so I can really see what people write. So sorry about your Dad. Hope it was peaceful.
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Mike Bayles
Date: 6/23/2012 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I apreciate hearing your reactions to the poem. With your sensitivity, I hope you write, too. My dad's passing was in 1993, and I think it was peaceful. He was at the tail end of Alzheimers' Disease. I had an important meeting that night, and missed his passage by half an hour. To cope, I became serious about my writing.

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