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Recurring Dream

There she stands in silent repose, her hair rests at her shoulders under little white bows. She fixates on the house in a field with no trees, it's lone luminescent window emanates unease. The path ahead is trodden, She's been here before, The wheat grass lays flat and broken right up to the door. Although the sky is painted with streaks of blackened clouds, the house casts an eerie shadow upon the barren grounds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Katie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:50:00 PM
congrats on your win.. very enjoyable poem..
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:26:00 PM
Katie, This is a very nice work. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Katie.
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:45:00 AM
Very beautifuly expressed, loved it and congratulations. Sami xx
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations Katie a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/19/2012 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Katie. This is a very descriptive write.
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:15:00 PM
cdongrats Katie on a great win for this dreamy delight luv..
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:48:00 PM
KATIE.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:03:00 AM
wow, such imagery, love this wonderful poem. congrats on this awesome winner in the contest. harry
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Katie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:22:00 PM
I'm happy to see this descriptive writing earned a place in the contest. Congratulations. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:45:00 PM
Congrats, Katie. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:21:00 AM
Lovely poem, congratulations on your win, and thank you for your comment Katie. love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:16:00 AM
I believe this is for the contest regarding dreams...the picture was so interesting and you tied in a fabulous set of lines to parallel it. The wheat grass lays flat and broken right up to the door was an excellent description !! Congrats on this win, Katie. Thanks for visiting my poetry too! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:07:00 PM
congrats Katie on another amazing win for these brilliant lines of poetry luv..
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:56:00 PM
You have created a sense of foreboding with this write. Very nicely written.
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:02:00 PM
Wonderful imagery! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda
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