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Rearange My Feeling

I will no longer allow you to make me feel any way but good I will no longer allow you to put in me what I don't want to enter I will no longer allow you to separate me from you if we are to be one I will no longer allow you to hurt me inside and keep it there I will no longer allow you to be you if I can't be me I will no longer allow you to rearange my feeling!

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Elaine George

Date: 1/2/2010 5:51:00 AM

You say this with such conviction and rightfully so. Only you should control yourself. Thank you for sharing your writing, dear Cathy. Love, Lainie

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/31/2009 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/29/2009 5:24:00 PM

Cathy~This sounds sad but very strongly done! I really liked this. Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Cathy. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Bryan Bolton

Date: 12/28/2009 11:14:00 AM

Congrats on being featured, more importantly a great poem with a message that speaks of heartbreak, frustration and the desire to move forward- good luck

James Fraser

Date: 12/28/2009 3:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James