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Reality is My Quiet Place

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Reality is My Quiet Place

Im angry that Time is precarious and unforgiving
Filthy the illusion of hope/possibility/time and the delusions this brings
When I die I hope Ive left with my eyes open 
Faith in the selfish demeaning nonsensical unfair philosophy of RELIGION?!
What is a blessing/being blessed/prayer?
What does this do?
Be thankful for what?
Forgive and forget HA! 
Endure abuse because ONE DAY . . . 

Hope, possibility and time . . .
Nothing’s fully erased
Olden impact is rippling 
Was Truth, now faith-replaced

Hope, possibility and time . . .
Live now! Carpe diem!
Hope steers a delusional life
Realize your freedom!

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 3:34:00 PM
    I like the emotional rhythm of your words.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Could feel the emotions! Good job.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:31:00 AM
    a write so true.. a personal relationship with God is a choice, just as religion is another. :) awesome poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:57:00 AM
    wonderful write Comfortable

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:34:00 PM
    wow I see your pen has'nt cooled down keep torchin that paper

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 11:36:00 AM
    I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations CI. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 4:57:00 PM
    I have to agree that there is quite a difference in Religion and having the Love of Jesus in our heart..Great expressive work..Thanks for participating in my contest..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, CI. Love, Suzette PS You might like my poem, Carpe Diem, which I wrote some time ago.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:36:00 AM
    C I., , , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD