Real Magic

fruit of the imagination, poetry done in rhyme can be, thoughts are deeds of damnation, when the mind of eye can see... as in when you do remote healing, see her aorta shrink for she, having it shrink confirmed by ray, magic it just seems to me... re: 'Baba Ghanoush' Michelle Mac Donald Don Johnson

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/25/2012 5:03:00 AM

I loved the opening line "fruit of the imagination" set the stage for the magnificient piece.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/12/2012 10:00:00 AM

i'm for one find this 'Real Magical' Don, enjoyed this..

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/9/2012 8:42:00 PM

You are always more understandable, Don.:) Eggplant to me is close to the colour of the crown chakra. Some say purple, some say white...baba ghanoush is the insideout? Oh, probably doesn't make a whole lot of sense, but this write certainly does.:) Best wishes, Mikki

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2012 7:57:00 PM

This is a special write my friend, quite stupendous! What a fabulous poem, full of life, and a new way of casting magic, through your poetry! I really enjoyed this delightful piece, Great Work!!