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Ready To Pose

From old to new, set Arranged in colors, hopeful Of new beginnings

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John Rhinem

Date: 3/8/2012 3:18:00 PM

Smile ~ Mmmm Yea Baby ~ Sweeet New Beginnings ~ Love Always, John!:) *

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 4:46:00 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Laura, has been a wonderful way to start my day. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/15/2010 9:51:00 AM

Nice one! You have Soup Mail.

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 2/14/2010 5:50:00 PM

This haiku says a lot. New beginnings are always available if one just takes the chance. Wonderful to read and inspiring.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 11:11:00 AM

Hi Laura: regarding your blog and my comment.. I checked my member contest entry page and I don't think I entered your contest because Sonnets escape me when writing .. just wanted to check and see for myself if I did or did not enter.. and I did not.. your choice of winning poets is wonderful.. I am reading them now to acquaint myself with the Sonnet form.. thankxxx and hope u will sponsor another contest real soon... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2010 7:15:00 AM

Many of us are looking for new beginnings, Laura. Uplifting haiku! I'm so glad you liked "There Once More" and I'll send you a Soup Mail with my address. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/13/2010 7:09:00 AM

Laura, This haiku brought so many images to mind. It was a delightful surprised, too. First, I thought of nature as the old dried flowers burst forth with new life. (And hurricanes make many things a new beginning.) Then, I thought about work and changes that often go on in work places...then, I thought of a model changing from old styles into colorful new styels...posing. Lots went on in my head this morning! Love to you, Dane Ann

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 12:35:00 PM

Clever Haiku. I like it. New beginnings are the best. Enjoy!

Milton Toran

Date: 2/10/2010 8:22:00 AM

Now that's what I call a haiku! Excellent 5-7-5 syllable count. Thanks for sharing. Peace and love, Milt

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/2/2010 7:42:00 AM

Wonderful form and flow to this read, Laura. Beautiful write! Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2010 8:00:00 PM

Hi Laura: just to let u know I am leaving the Soup Site and have removed my entry from your current contest...due to an overwhelming controversy over my three way collaboration with Jared Pickett and Sam Brooks... soup management received reports about my undignified poetry ... so I have decided it is in my best interests to go with another forum where there is universal appeal for my poetry.. thankxxx for being a good friend to me... luv.. Linda-Marie..