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Read It and Heed It

read it and heed it this is my warning
take what you want but reap what you sow
is eternity worth the price
for what you think you may know

you've given up on your life, your dreams
you're left here standing hollowed
where the strong have lead
the weak have surely followed

this body is your vessal
this life is your open sea
your hate and contempt shall leave you shackled
forgiveness, this is truth, shall set you free

this is my warning i heed unto thee
you came into this life with good intent
yet the life you lead is far more tainted
to free thy soul thine must repent

love your family for we are all but one
do unto others as ye be done
try to be happy...
life is meant to be fun.

Copyright © mike patrick

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  1. Date: 2/3/2010 9:29:00 PM
    haha...ya. ill certainly be doing it again at some point...i really dont care what other people think anymore. since when are people not allowed to be happy...whatever it takes to get that way haha

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 7:34:00 PM
    Well Mike I certainly agree with your last line 100 percent.. I also write a lot of spiritual poetry which is listed on my 558 poems on this site... thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry tonight.. sharing is half the fun on this site .. making friends is the other....looking forward to reading more of your poetry ... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 7:53:00 PM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 2:26:00 PM
    great poem, hope you are having a wonderful Sunday. It is rainy and windy here, so I am in front of the screen, wanting to be a poet. :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 9:04:00 AM
    Good advice to all, Mike. Inspirational and straight from your grateful heart! Thanks for sharing this and welcome to PoetrySoup! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 10:07:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mike. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 9:16:00 PM
    I love your way of saying trust in God and repent and read His Word and heed it! Enjoyed...Marty