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Raw Honey

She captures his thoughts 
and drapes them across her lips to
see what he tastes like

*I know I messed up the syllables, but it looked better like this*

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  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:21:00 PM
    Smile ~ Hi Baby, i really love this poe but i bet that she taste even better; her lips that is; honey from a sweet honeybee vine ~ Smile ~ I miss your precious beauty Micaela ~ So very special & gifted you are my dear, dear lady ~ Happy Easter Baby * Love always, John!:) ~

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 9:21:00 AM
    He sounds quite delicious, Micaela! Don't worry about the syllable count, this poem stands on its own merits. Great write! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 10:34:00 AM
    Thank you Micaela for sharing your amazing poetry with us all today. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:39:00 PM
    Very interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara