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Raven's Love and Hope Kept Alive

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Raven's Love and Hope Kept Alive

Part II

“I walk a decrepit graveyard alone, in mists stirred by contrast winds
As a storm brews, I am grateful that I know in my heart he's alive 
Skies bream with promise of torrent rain and shelter must be found
It appears; I’ve lost my shawl, and feel the cold chill even as I dream
I’m convinced it’s due to the storm; not because I walk amidst the dead
Further, I see through clammy mist a mausoleum, looms in the silence 

As I near those rusty iron gates, leaves rustle loud in the silence 
And I picture armed vagrants once here, perhaps chased by the winds
Now I rest assured, I am alone as I search this place of the dead
Painful moans erupt from within; my heart leaps; could it be, he's alive?
‘Who are you?’ My hear raced fiercely, convinced, this concludes my dream 
Intermittent moonlight cast upon the floor, My Ross, at last is found!”

In a tomb her Ross laid in the silence; by love and hope kept alive
Calling upon soft summer winds; manifested in persistent dreams 
Which resounded that among the dead, her beloved would be found

By Annalise Brigham
For: A Rambling Poet’s “Among the Dead” Contest

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  1. Date: 2/25/2011 2:59:00 AM
    You did an amazing job on your poem and I have to tell you this poem is what inspired me to write mine for the contest. Thank you so much for that. Many congrats on your Big Win luv ~Virginia

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:39:00 AM
    I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 7:07:00 AM
    Many congratulations Annalise on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:50:00 PM
    wonderful story!congrats on your big win Annalise!

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:59:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Annalise! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 9:02:00 AM
    Nice description of the picture. Congratulations for your big win...rohini

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:00:00 AM
    I'm so happy to see your placing high with this masterpiece, dear Annalise. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:31:00 AM
    glory be!! HAPPY CONGRATS for this impressive work, anna.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:13:00 AM
    Wonderful story Annalise. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 8:25:00 PM
    Beautiful Annalise, just beautiful. many congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:31:00 PM
    Such a haunting poem this! Great job, Annalise! Congratulations on your win! you wove a great story with words!~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:01:00 PM
    Vivid writing Annalise. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
    Beautiful Job, Annalise, congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:21:00 PM
    An impressive writing, Annalise. Congratulations on winning with it in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:38:00 PM
    Congrats Annalise on your wonderful winning poem in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 8:58:00 PM
    That was....well I don't even have words to express leaves me feeling like you should have already been published long ago if not already. Great write you have no idea how much I enjoyed it, the contest be yours :)~Virginia

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 1:01:00 PM
    Dear Annalise, I have a P.S, Soup Mail Call

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 12:56:00 PM
    Dear Annalise, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved 1st place Win in "Rain, the Story" Sponsored by "Constance a Rambling POET" Thank-YOu for my walk down the path of YOUR Dream : the same Dream I myself have walked Superb Write YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG