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Rains Fall

Silent, the rains pierced the rainbows, grasping colours as they fell. Rolled the Swallows wings, caressed the Unicorns mane and kissed the earth with kindness. Roots drank and petals reached out, Ladybird's waded ankle deep in the ambience. Mellow, soft kisses danced in the fertile sunlight, roots pushed and buds opened in serenity. Under the arc of the rainbow the Unicorn pranced as life danced, all was still, the breeze gentle carrying natures fragrance in tiny parcels of sentient odour. Was it a dream or was it your eyes that gifted this vision to me. Was it the dawn breaking or the stars glinting that set this heart alight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 5:30:00 PM
Hi Daniel...I really liked this poem. Great metaphors and imagery. Thanks for reading my work.
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:13:00 PM
Sweetly descriptive Daniel and elegantly penned my friend... a beautiful journey through your words ... wonderful ..enjoyed with luv.. and a Happy New Year..too..
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:17:00 AM
There is a contest going on Rain, the story. You may enter this poem if you choose to., Daniel.
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful imagery of the rain you worded so well in this poem, enjoyed it, Daniel
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Date: 12/29/2010 7:08:00 AM
This has a breathless quality, just soft and beautiful.....a wonderful peaceful poem, Daniel. I enjoyed this tranquil moment. :)
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