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Raindrops Inscribes

Percussion instruments, raindrops are falling into succession Increasingly they empty straight into the archaic night Another drop after powerful enlightening drop Umbrellas being used to accompany the awesome beat Equipped tonight, equipped with interesting music All round allured percussion instruments beating Insightful, they operate with umbrellas tonight Impressionable romping onto tops of the umbrellas Sound enlisted by outside percussion instruments Perfect into timeless opulent musical announcements Pleased another beat enjoys sound escape Secretly and positively enjoyed rhythm, it’s loved, It’s loved into the instrument percussion ensued
Russell Sivey Entrant into David Williams' "Con / Vow" contest 2/4/2013

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:23:00 AM
    well written Russell...Seren

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Russell, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:26:00 AM
    awesome poem Russell!!Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:12:00 AM
    Congratulations Russell !!! Your repetition of choice words and phrases really brought home the effect!!! :) wonderful job my friend. Big hugs deb

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Russell Congratulations on your placement in my contest, a highly enjoyable read and a great theme, I shall never see or hear raindrops the same ever again, well done...David

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:01:00 PM
    wow, this is so clever, Russell - love the rain and love this

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Oooh! Another great one! I absolutely love the rain, and this poem is so alive with color and energy. Wonderful comparison and metaphorical insight. Simply splendid. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:36:00 AM
    You did it Suvvey and that wasnt easy at all.Ilove the music you ve created through pattering rain.

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:53:00 AM
    The sounds of rain is musical even though sometimes very wet and cold..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morning..Yes, I saw the lone buzzard and it seemed that he was up there where the jets fly but of course I know it wasn't that high..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:37:00 PM
    hmmm I have no clue if you did it right. I doubt i will even try this contest out because it looked so difficult to me. If you did it right, I am proud of you, Russell!!! It would be no easy feat!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:07:00 PM
    well versed con/vow,,...good luck in the contest...

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Nice one, nice idea Gary

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:17:00 PM
    You can write anything, Russell and it would sound awesome. I can't believe you can see so much through little sounds of rain. True romantic. Amazing. I love it!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 8:38:00 PM
    You paint us a lovely image of the rain Russell, you make me want to run out in the rain, my fav line is line two "Increasingly they empty straight into the archaic night" Nothing like a night rainfall the bring you a beautiful morning after, enjoyed your entry Russell, have a nice evening xxx