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Rain Trickles

Rain slowly trickles Dribbles from blue asphalt roof Wets ink 'pon page "Twas dry dull work written by The old poet as tears did flow
For Jimbo

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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:13:00 PM
    I can really relate to this one. Such an excellent poem so short but filled with individual interpretations. Excellent job my friend.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:16:00 PM
    clever write - love the way you used tears and rain, Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:27:00 AM
    Wow! lovely and thought provoking write. Usually the ink and tears flow together.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:25:00 AM
    What an interesting, beautiful conflation of ideas... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:34:00 PM
    what a contrast between the poet's work and his tears. Well done poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:59:00 PM
    You had me at the first know my poet soul, did you know my eyes would fill with tears before line 3? I've tried so hard these last few years to pour my heart out thru poetry....captured here on soup ....I still have much to heart is filled with compassion for all living things....and love for all things imperfect....seems trivial to say I will print and fave this mystical art forever....yours...jimbo

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:10:00 PM
    Hi Sara, love your tanka,, Jimbo will love your has a sad sentimental image... I hope Jimbo is alright.....enjoyed your poem~always~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:47:00 PM
    Hi Sara a pleasure to read as always, thanks for sharing, all the best Owen