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Rain through my window

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Rain through my window



Rain through my window
Dark clouds,slow breeze and lightning
Hands wet by rain splash

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 4:39:00 AM
    hey there !! refreshing and a sweet and short poetry !! Love , Saanvi :)))

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:11:00 AM
    hey, I need new poems from you!!! just stopping in to say hi and thanks for your comment to my poem.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:26:00 PM
    A much visible poem Jenish, I like it xxx

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Welcome to the site. You are off to a good start with this fine first entry.

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:12:00 PM
    Hi Jenish, i will be back after work to read all your poems...:-) Linda

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:22:00 PM
    I love reading haiku so I want to read all of yours tonight!! Good one to start with, your first post!!

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:09:00 PM
    I like your haiku, Jenish, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Jenish. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 8:13:00 AM
    nice

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 6:51:00 AM
    Welcome to poetrysoup.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Rain through your window,that must be irritating.Nice imagery.