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Rain Painted Rose

dont we all
deep within the walls 
of a 
rain painted rose
moments once fresh are set ablaze
whose bones are jewel encrusted 
within our deepest reds 
the scent of saints and dreams are 
glancing off a soul of glass
so very briefly glowing off the face-
as every breath tends to climb toward light
reaching the softest edge giving away..
tumbling down 
a stairwell of thorns-
the clowns of living cycling
round and round a face forelorn

turned to dreamware we're juggled
(dented circus pins)
between hell and hope..less
the kiln of god
the devils twisted rope-
dont we all
live within the walls
of a 
rain painted

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:06:00 PM
    I have neglected commenting on so many poems and have missed reading wonderful work, ...this poem makes me wake up and smell the roses...and climb up the stairwell of thorny gems. I must read more.:)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 PM
    Loved the title and a lot of the lines but I don't consider this a rhyme styled poem as it is coded. Still I enjoyed the poem.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:22:00 PM
    :-) pd

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:32:00 PM
    gosh, this is REALLY good free verse. Such imagery!! I don't see many like this one!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:32:00 PM
    I like poems that start and end with the same question. Your journey in between premise and conclusion is fascinating. I like the "tumbling down a stairwell of thorns" image. Enjoyed this a bunch...John