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Rain Against My Skin

a peacefulness rains on me as I slowly give in and feel the drops of tranquility against my aching skin the gift of relief I am given I can take a breath and sigh enjoy the moment of clarity until it comes again. ©Holly P. Moore March 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2015 7:43:00 AM
Loved this calming piece Holly!. All the Best.
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Date: 5/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
Beautifully written and serene. Betty
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Date: 4/5/2013 12:06:00 AM
I love how you wrote this, very nice Holly ;}
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Date: 4/2/2013 11:59:00 AM
Holly how are you? hope it is all going well...David
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Date: 3/30/2013 6:59:00 AM
Excellent. Breath taking write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/27/2013 10:59:00 PM
This is beautiful and so serene luv. I wanted so much to stand with you.
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Date: 3/25/2013 8:28:00 AM
Dear Holly, I have been away too long from my favorite poets. I think of you, Holly, and am happy for your sweet moments of clarity. Your poem is so touching and hopeful and gentle. love you, Kathy
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Date: 3/24/2013 10:51:00 AM
Oh Holly this poem when reading, just oozes peace, love this....
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Date: 3/23/2013 12:28:00 AM
this is fantastic, Molly. The kind of poetry I love reading.
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Date: 3/22/2013 7:19:00 PM
groovy
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Date: 3/22/2013 3:34:00 PM
Holly you are using a metaphor for an inner feeling, it washes over you allowing you to breath, I can see you enjoying the moment...David
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Date: 3/22/2013 1:07:00 PM
- Rain can feel delicious ...... when we need it. - Beautiful poem Holly! - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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