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Rain Against My Skin

a peacefulness rains on me
as I slowly give in
and feel the drops of tranquility
against my aching skin
the gift of relief I am given
I can take a breath and sigh
enjoy the moment of clarity
until it comes again.

©Holly P. Moore
   March 2013

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William Gray Date: 3/10/2015 7:43:00 AM Loved this calming piece Holly!. All the Best. Login to Reply

Betty Bateson Date: 5/18/2013 6:53:00 AM Beautifully written and serene. Betty Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/5/2013 12:06:00 AM I love how you wrote this, very nice Holly ;} Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 4/2/2013 11:59:00 AM Holly how are you? hope it is all going well...David Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/30/2013 6:59:00 AM Excellent. Breath taking write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/27/2013 10:59:00 PM This is beautiful and so serene luv. I wanted so much to stand with you. Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 3/25/2013 8:28:00 AM Dear Holly, I have been away too long from my favorite poets. I think of you, Holly, and am happy for your sweet moments of clarity. Your poem is so touching and hopeful and gentle. love you, Kathy Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/24/2013 10:51:00 AM Oh Holly this poem when reading, just oozes peace, love this.... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/23/2013 12:28:00 AM this is fantastic, Molly. The kind of poetry I love reading. Login to Reply

John Allen Date: 3/22/2013 7:19:00 PM groovy Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 3/22/2013 3:34:00 PM Holly you are using a metaphor for an inner feeling, it washes over you allowing you to breath, I can see you enjoying the moment...David Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/22/2013 1:07:00 PM - Rain can feel delicious ...... when we need it. - Beautiful poem Holly! - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply