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Rain Against My Skin

a peacefulness rains on me
as I slowly give in
and feel the drops of tranquility
against my aching skin
the gift of relief I am given
I can take a breath and sigh
enjoy the moment of clarity
until it comes again.

©Holly P. Moore
   March 2013

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  1. Date: 3/10/2015 7:43:00 AM
    Loved this calming piece Holly!. All the Best.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Beautifully written and serene. Betty

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 12:06:00 AM
    I love how you wrote this, very nice Holly ;}

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Holly how are you? hope it is all going well...David

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Excellent. Breath taking write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 10:59:00 PM
    This is beautiful and so serene luv. I wanted so much to stand with you.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Dear Holly, I have been away too long from my favorite poets. I think of you, Holly, and am happy for your sweet moments of clarity. Your poem is so touching and hopeful and gentle. love you, Kathy

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Holly, this is absolutely breath taking. Well done, hugs! :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Oh Holly this poem when reading, just oozes peace, love this....

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:28:00 AM
    this is fantastic, Molly. The kind of poetry I love reading.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:19:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Holly you are using a metaphor for an inner feeling, it washes over you allowing you to breath, I can see you enjoying the moment...David

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:07:00 PM
    - Rain can feel delicious ...... when we need it. - Beautiful poem Holly! - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)