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Rain Against My Face


All I've felt was rain against my face
No rhyme or reason, just a season laced with pain
Blinded, then, by a watershed of years, 
Designed to be forgotten, resigned through all my tears.......... 

Yet through a blur I see a rainbow in the sky
One word from you is like my stairway to the stars
Assured, I've found you, and the shelter of your arms
Tomorrow's season will have a sun again




The sun may disappear,...  forever warm within your arms,... 
                                          oh, yes...there you are....                                   
It doesn't matter, now, having rain against my face 
You've chased away the cold, and kept me closer, just in case...

                    You've wiped away my tears, with falling stars.......

Lyrics For the Contest Sponsored By Craig Cornish "Emmanuel"

Copyright © Carrie Richards

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  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this poem in the season and congratulations on the win, Carrie

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:16:00 PM
    loved this when i first read it and knew i would see it in the winner's list! Congrats Carrie

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Excellent Carrie, lovely heartfelt poem, congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:27:00 PM
    beautiful write Carrie...and very fitting for the song...I took had rain in mine, but it doesn't compare to this...good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Stunning. Absolutely stunning & breathtaking. Bonus on the piano interlude. That's how it's done.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 10:58:00 PM
    this is gorgeous and I have not even heard the music yet!! he is going to love this.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 9:56:00 PM
    I can hear the music and your words fit well, blessings Carrie, from my heart to yours xxx