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As I stand here in the rain,
The raindrops fall on me and wash away all my pain.
I am the thunder and you are the lightning.

You know who you are and to me that's exciting.
The laughter we share, the memories I have.
Love is growing between us. It has to be said.
Our hearts and minds becoming entwined.
Bound to each other, never to let go.
Then, why are you leaving, distressing me so.
"I'll be back soon darling" you whisper. " Please let me go".
I smile and let go of your hand. My heart is breaking but you will never know.    
" Wait for me" you say as you wave me goodbye.  
My heart is heavy, the tears fall.
The rain comes harder, let it pour.

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:25:00 AM
    I love this! It has an air of mystery with the right dish of angst. Very nice!

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 4:20:00 PM
    I really enjoyd your poem! I felt it had alot of power and meaning in its words. Yet I felt the ending should have been a bit more mind blowing to fit the rest of the poem that simply was amazing. This is just something for you to think about when making your next poem. Try to end it with something that makes your viewers think about. Though I do love your writing style!

    janoowalla Avatar tahera janoowalla
    Date: 9/3/2012 3:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou for you valid comments. I will consider this in my next work.
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:38:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Tahera. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    janoowalla Avatar tahera janoowalla
    Date: 9/3/2012 3:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou very much. Looking forward to reading work by other poets.