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Rain

I like the rain And its effortless thoughts That plunk down on plastic furniture Sleeping cars Grimacing pedestrians Interrupting your Sunday hair And how we scatter away In our silly ways, like ducks on a pond Instead of drinking The world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2011 10:37:00 AM
Oh yes! I like your style - fresh. The last two lines are priceless. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Julia. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:46:00 PM
a good write on nature Julia,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:32:00 PM
Great one that you have penned... Reads like you are one who would take life as it comes and be a survivor..Sara
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