Rain

Shadow has lifted, illumination complete Farewell fleeing rain

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James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2010 2:18:00 PM

It's goodbye to the rains, and hello to the sun. But when the grounds become dry, the rains are so welcome > thank you for your kind comments Karla >> James

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2010 6:53:00 PM

A vivid Haiku Karala, sincerely, Moses

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/17/2009 12:37:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Karla, your comment meant a lot to me...Raul

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 10/12/2009 9:00:00 AM

This is very nice. Thank you for comments on " Me & Prison" No it's not a nice place - I would not say "for anyone", Some people need to be in here! I don't have much more time..18 months. Talk to you later Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2009 5:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Karla. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol