Rail Dream

rusty rails touching a salty handcar within the kingly elk's plain rusty rails salty handcar camera obscura

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/17/2011 11:38:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Lisa. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/16/2011 8:02:00 AM

full of imagery and symbolism, good work Lisa.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/15/2011 6:50:00 PM

Brilliant haiku with good images on rail dream, Lisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2011 6:18:00 PM

INteresting haiku, Lisa! Good title.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2011 4:05:00 PM

Good one..I can just see the scene..Sara