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Below is the poem entitled rail dream which was written by poet Lisa Lee. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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rail dream

rusty rails touching 
    a salty handcar within 
the kingly elk's plain

rusty rails
    salty handcar
camera obscura

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  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:38:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Lisa. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:02:00 AM
    full of imagery and symbolism, good work Lisa.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:50:00 PM
    Brilliant haiku with good images on rail dream, Lisa

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:18:00 PM
    INteresting haiku, Lisa! Good title.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:05:00 PM
    Good one..I can just see the scene..Sara