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Radiant smile

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Radiant smile

I can remember that day…like it was just yesterday. The pain inside, was too much to 
bear. As they lowered you in the ground, my world came a crashing down. No more 
would I ever see your radiant smile. That day is still a blur…as I drank the night away. 
Hoping it was all just a dream? But, reality came around and my emotions broke me 
down…and it all came a crashing down. It took me by surprise as those tears filled my 
eyes. My drink became a salty river of tears…I can still hear the Reverends last words 
as he commended your body to the earth. I was around town feeling sorry for myself, 
my emotions were coming down…I could still he his words as he commended you to the 
earth, but my heart couldn’t let you go. As they held me back from jumping in your 
grave…the emotions started to fill my soul, I was around town feeling so sorry for 
myself. Try to drown my pain with whiskey and beer…but those emotions came a 
tumbling down. As my drink became a salty river of tears, no more…no more…would I 
ever hear your laughter, that seemed as though it could fill the ever after. Later that 
night as I lay down to sleep, I reached over to that empty spot where you use to be…I 
swear I could almost hear you say, “ Dry your tears, someday we will be back together 
as we laugh together in this life here after…so weep no more. I’ll see you on the other 
side.” As I closed my eyes, the pain began to subside…I knew one day soon I’d get to 
see your radiant smile and hear your laughter.

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  1. Date: 5/19/2011 7:12:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Jay. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 11:19:00 PM
    Awesome! Very touching story, and yes, you too will surely meet again in the hereafter. You have made a few repetition in your write, but your heart and emotion were well expressed and were felt through the lines. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 5/18/2011 4:29:00 PM
    So enjoyed reading your very creative poetry tonight Jay.. lovely lilting lines of emotion expressed luv..

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    Date: 5/18/2011 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda, hey this must be a new feature...use to be hard to leave a response. Thank all of you who read and enjoy my poetry!