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Racing Thoughts

Listen …. Hear that? Quiet I’m all alone. No one here (I hope she’s ok) Now I can write Computer hum, traffic noise Hear that Radio talking to me and Selling me (I hope she’s ok) Something … Computer’s humming And the Red Sox lost again (Carry on my wayward son…) She wants me to add her as a friend No way! (I hope she’s ok) Too ugly! (Lay your weary head to rest…) What’s this about the Patriots? (I hope she’s ok) I missed it (Once I rose above the noise and confusion) (Please let it be easy for her!!!!) Wow, it’s quiet around here (Just to get a glimpse behind this illusion….) Nice and quiet here today What the hell was I doing? (I hope she’s ok)

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Date: 8/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
I think we can all relate to racing thoughts! I hope "she's" okay, too. -Rach
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:26:00 AM
Wow you have thoughts racing in your mind like horses on the track!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:02:00 AM
Your thoughts sure are racing.. But it always go back to her.. Does that mean you really care about her well being? Interesting write ~ rgds WN
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:41:00 AM
i also hope she's ok, who ever she is and whatever happens to her. you are making me curious about what happened to her. i have a feeling that she's undergoing a surgery, isn't she?? oh.. well this is really a racing thought.. yes, it's quiet on the outside but your mind is racing and never quiet. oh ya! i get it!! lol:) lizann
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