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Quite A Short Journey

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Quite A Short Journey

Should be more laughter It'd be so much better Smile at your neighbours An attention getter Stand up and holler We're all human beings Why treat our brethren With actions so mean Just call me a dreamer And maybe I am Better than moaning To beat the band Don't have any secrets I'm known to possess Just like youse guys Trying hard to impress It's quite a short journey Time has sure flown Before you know it It's time to go home A journey too short Time to pass the baton Make room for the young'uns And just mosey on © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:43:00 PM
    No you need to stick around and teach these younguns a thing or two!!!!.....for a long time!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/13/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This guy ain't goin' nowhere! Got too many great friends in my life... can't leave 'em! Thank you "great friend" xoxoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:55:00 PM
    A selfless message you know. But I'm sure if more people went by it they would be more happy. Lovely piece once again. Always, Laura

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    SWEET! Your reply sure made me feel good, Laura! Thanks a big bunch... love, Jack xoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:14:00 AM
    I do believe that life is shorter than we think, Before we know it it's over. I want Thank you for your compliments on my Avatar. That's how I look after I came back to life from being sick. I'm still not all that well, but I'm getting better. Thanks for sharing this poem... Lucilla

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You SURE look good to me sweet lady! Wasn't aware you weren't well but happy to hear you're coming along! Continue to get better dear Lucilla! xoxoxxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:07:00 AM
    You better stay around... after all DRAGON is part of the next generation... And he needs ALL the help he can get! Really! You're teaching him a whole lot!... if he'll stop to listen... LOL... You know Dragon! When you get done with you're life up there... Dragon says you can come here... He still doesn't get it, does he?... Oh well... what's a ghost ans shade among friends... You can haunt us any time... If Cathie says it's OK.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Having way too much fun down here... they'd have to drag me kicking and screaming! LOL xoxoxoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:13:00 AM
    You make an interesting statement. "Just like youse guys, trying hard to impress". First off, "youse", hilarious. Secondly, the key to "impressing" somebody, is to not try at all. Stay true to you and others who are true, in return, will treat you as such. I used to try that many years ago. But, today, I am me. Whoever doesn't like it, the door is right over there. I'll make sure it doesn't hit them as they leave. You friggin rock, Jack!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ya know, you are sooo right! It's not rocket science... just let it flow! Thanks Drake my friend... I value what you have say on any subject! Cheers, my friend!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:30:00 AM
    I love the advice you have about life, although I have to say, it's not time for you to mosey on just yet my friend! You still have much wisdom to spread to all us "young'uns" Jack! Although I don't feel I'm that young, time has deteriorated some of my life and time has surely passed on by quickly. just like you mentioned! This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We can't stop the clock nor turn back time so it's better to just go with the flow! Thank you once more, my friend, for your always kind words... cheers!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:44:00 AM
    Don't you dare mosey on just yet, my dear. We need you here to cheer us on and share the light. Wonderful write, my dear....wonderful...Hugs!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's a long term "mosey" LOL You are so so sweet my Betty Boop from Beirut! Happy day! Love and huggsies, Kenny xoxoxox