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Quiete Thought

I remember the silhouettes dancing the walls, as amour embraced in the candle glow. Pore on pore, chest to breast, hip to hip, kisses passed by sensual lip. Body oils mixed and blended, trailing fingers and heights ascended. Desire, passion, poured those sheets, of total love the heart it beats. I remember that night of fire, where two bodies did conspire, to satisfy and never tire, blissful strain and spasm's felt, in the lust did feelings melt. How can I forget, when those lips first met, how you took me to the stars, and blessed this life of ours.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/16/2010 4:14:00 AM
Very passionate write...Sara
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:13:00 AM
Sensual and romantic another wonderful piece...Allie
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:49:00 PM
great first kiss!! Better than I remember! smile
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:57:00 AM
From this and one of your other new posts, the reader senses you have suffered a loss. As you said in the other, people tell us time heals, but it never seems to move quickly enough when we are feeling this way. I'm really sorry if this has happened to you, Daniel, and hope you are dealing with it as well as can be expected. Writing about the loss does seem to help. I love your writing style! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:14:00 AM
Oh YES................great to read you again Daniel! Ahhhhhh Jeralynn
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:46:00 AM
so beautiful,passionate,going to my favs Daniel.
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:25:00 AM
amazing write of an amazing moment- Bravo Daniel
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