Quiete Thought

I remember the silhouettes dancing
the walls, as amour embraced in the
candle glow. Pore on pore, chest to
breast, hip to hip, kisses passed by
sensual lip. Body oils mixed and
blended, trailing fingers and heights
ascended. Desire, passion, poured
those sheets, of total love the heart
it beats. I remember that night of
fire, where two bodies did conspire,
to satisfy and never tire, blissful
strain and spasm's felt, in the lust
did feelings melt. How can I forget,
when those lips first met, how you
took me to the stars, and blessed
this life of ours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/16/2010 4:14:00 AM
Very passionate write...Sara
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:13:00 AM
Sensual and romantic another wonderful piece...Allie
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:49:00 PM
great first kiss!! Better than I remember! smile
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:57:00 AM
From this and one of your other new posts, the reader senses you have suffered a loss. As you said in the other, people tell us time heals, but it never seems to move quickly enough when we are feeling this way. I'm really sorry if this has happened to you, Daniel, and hope you are dealing with it as well as can be expected. Writing about the loss does seem to help. I love your writing style! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:14:00 AM
Oh YES................great to read you again Daniel! Ahhhhhh Jeralynn
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:46:00 AM
so beautiful,passionate,going to my favs Daniel.
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:25:00 AM
amazing write of an amazing moment- Bravo Daniel
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