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Quiet Comptemplation

. We sat on a hill Gazing at a mere wisp of a crescent moon In a starless sky No words Silent Contemplating Man God The Universe

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/30/2009 1:58:00 PM

no words silent contemplating-great reminder here,sometimes life s too busy i forget,and i lovr the way you spaced this and n the shape of a cross---bravo and thanks again for your help-ans for your kind comment---charma

Daver Austin

Date: 4/30/2009 7:45:00 AM

Contemplation is great! I've done it for years. Jesus said, "Go into your closet." Hey! That's where IT is! Love, daver

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/29/2009 8:13:00 AM

Dear Laurie, YOU have given me peace in this Superb write LOVE the layout LOVE ALWAYS... HG

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/29/2009 3:48:00 AM

Hi Laurie! Kinda shaped like a chalice... uplifting, with excellent word choices. BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/28/2009 2:11:00 PM

Laurie, you know I LOVE! poems with pacing-space, I love the purity of this poem...Jim

Ronald Bingham

Date: 4/28/2009 8:43:00 AM

I like Carrie's comment, it just radiates peace. God Bless, Ron

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2009 8:20:00 AM

This would have been the most wonderful poem to fall asleep dreaming of....what peace it holds! (Wish I had had it last night). ~ love, C.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/28/2009 7:30:00 AM

Wonderful that you are able to take time out and enjoy a minute of peace.