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Quiet As Night

The other shoe
a mystery, discovery...
The other shoe
knowing disappointment was due.
It’d been good, didn’t want to see...
Never thought it’d happen to me,
the other shoe.

Quiet as night,
demon of darkness found the face.
Quiet as night
when innocence robbed of the light
while beaten and bound, tied with lace...
as torture becomes commonplace.
Quiet as night...

Janet L Vick
Rondelet duo

Copyright © Janet Vick

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
    WoW! What an emotional piece. Sounds like someone was tortured and raped bound by their shoelaces. Hope it was just a poem and not taken from an actual happening. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 11:02:00 PM
    WoW! There is a couple of ways this can be taken. In many ways life in general can be torture for some because as it says here you get so used to disappointment that when things start going well you keep waiting for the other shoe to drop, and sooner or later it seems it usually does. A fine piece here. Lots of emotion. God Bless, JB

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 6/2/2012 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Judy for reading and commenting..
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 11:56:00 AM
    I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Janet. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 2/4/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are more than welcome. Take care. Janet