Quicksand- In the Arms of Paranoia

Vanquished and exhausted, I wrap myself in the cold blankets of Humility Further down the Spiral, in the Arms of Paranoia- Looking at Life's sad Futility Cascading, parading- the light of day is quickly fading In Love's Quicksand, I begin to sink But then I laugh unto myself- Because I am drowning and cannot think

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/5/2014 5:27:00 PM

Chan Chan This write gives the reader a sense of sadness and hopelessness that comes from inside you. It made me sad thinking you feel this way. I am sending you the biggest huggie ever. LOL Thanks for the very awesome and sweet comment on my Hidden Strength poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/6/2014 6:22:00 AM

Thanks again for being the first to review this piece, Robin. I always appreciate your reviews, Sweet Pea :)