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Quickly and Sound

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Quickly and Sound

It's hard to face this life alone, Have all you want but no one's home
I had a chance to be complete, but it came and went, I taste defeat
She came to me in those summer months, I didn't know that was all it was
I held her close for one whole night, for that one night I was alright

I think of those days often
relive every second
dreaming it and wishing
my life's one perfect vision

Her breath hit mine, we intertwined
Our body's touched, simply divine 
I stared at her, she smiled at me
In that one moment I was complete
our lips had touched, my heart erupts

True love was found, Quickly and Sound

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:13:00 AM
    A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Dylan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Dylan. - You write very well, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wishing you a peaceful and lovely Christmas! - (Welcome to my Christmas poem.) - / / Anne-Lise :)