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Quickly and Sound

It's hard to face this life alone, Have all you want but no one's home I had a chance to be complete, but it came and went, I taste defeat She came to me in those summer months, I didn't know that was all it was I held her close for one whole night, for that one night I was alright I think of those days often relive every second dreaming it and wishing my life's one perfect vision Her breath hit mine, we intertwined Our body's touched, simply divine I stared at her, she smiled at me In that one moment I was complete our lips had touched, my heart erupts True love was found, Quickly and Sound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/19/2012 11:13:00 AM
A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Dylan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2012 1:40:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Dylan. - You write very well, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wishing you a peaceful and lovely Christmas! - (Welcome to my Christmas poem.) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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