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Queen of Sky

blessed with yellow beak a dark colored queen parade in sweet scents of life jealousy soaks mates as her white neck bracelet seduce surrounding at the peeps of dawn she sings suiting serenade to her nesting kids she flies and perches beneath duty-poised sunshine hunting for her kids while at cold-veiled nights she wing-secures her sweet kids as silent murmurs 01/08/2011 Written in honor of John Freeman's photo. For "pure thoughts contest"

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Date: 8/16/2011 8:11:00 PM
I didn't mind coming back to this poem, because it's truly beautiful, fine imagery, fine thoughts! Well done, Osita.
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:37:00 PM
I am glad to be back on the soup...lol.. hope it stays up... congrats on your win... glad to read all your haikus,..p.d.
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Date: 8/7/2011 7:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:03:00 PM
Wonderful!!!!!!!! Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! --Lori
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:28:00 PM
Joseph, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:01:00 AM
This poem reminds me of the song Orinoco Flow by Celtic Woman
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:23:00 PM
See no need to worry, form was not considered only content! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:01:00 PM
yes Joseph a brilliant poem and a big win for u luv.. a stellar victory with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:56:00 PM
greeeat, joseph...cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 9:41:00 AM
lovely portrait in words Joseph on that spectacular photo for the contest.. u gave this eagle life and persona luv..good luck in John's masterful contest..
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:39:00 PM
Soup mail coming!Light & Love
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:27:00 PM
Beautiful poetry.. I am sure this is a winner, I love it and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:40:00 AM
So which beautiful bird is this one? This is very pretty.
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Joseph Osita
Date: 8/2/2011 6:28:00 AM
It's the bird in john's photo. I wanted to play game with your minds
Date: 8/1/2011 11:13:00 PM
Very well described my friend. It has really good imagery. Just so you know an eagles babies are called eaglets. A kidd is a baby goat. Great job here though. A most enjoyable read. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:12:00 PM
such intersting, lively small write, they are not haiku but they are very good writes http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist this is an excellent simple aid! Hope it's of help! LighT & Love
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Date: 8/1/2011 7:20:00 PM
Fine imageries, Osita, with simplicity and directness, love this write, love how you describe this bird, without stating explicitly the subject, God bless!
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Date: 8/1/2011 6:59:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work that says winner..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2011 4:03:00 PM
Hey Joseph, this is kinda fantastic. A wonderful Haiku series, nice one :)
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:43:00 PM
How beautifully you describe this bird, Joey. Especially loved the line about her "white neck bracelet." I'm wondering what type of bird this is. Great write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:26:00 PM
Very lovely haiku with continuous theme, Joseph
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:08:00 PM
a string of kus thrilling me no end, joseph! stunning offerings..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:02:00 PM
This is a stunning Haiku Joseph.. Very Beautiful.... I luv the title as well!!!!!!!!!!
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