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Quartet of the Winds

Tenor winds of Spring, A swift orchestrated gust; Ensemble of air. * Ensemble of air, With Summer’s baritone draft; Layered season breeze. * Layered season breeze, Falsetto of the Fall’s fugue; In the this quartet. * In the this quartet, Soprano hums, Winter‘s end; Quartet of the winds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 11:37:00 PM
Excellent, this one is grandeur.
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Date: 5/14/2009 4:30:00 AM
just genius Raul, genius
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Date: 5/11/2009 10:57:00 PM
Dear Raul, Superb BRAVO! BRaVO! Encore ENCORE I must ask-- Did YOU ever study The great forms on Oreintal POETRY YOU write such Lovely SENRYU, HAIKU, and now a great CHOKA You could Sponsor a Contest The First Stanza a HAIKU second a SENRYU 3 4 and 5 Choka I could do it Good to see YOU again My POETRY FRIEND Blessings to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:39:00 AM
Hi Raul.. yes I agree with Charlene... very elegant I thought ....
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Date: 5/9/2009 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful use of sound imagery for interesting reading. I like the creative perspective. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your congrats. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/9/2009 10:05:00 AM
Every stanza more beautiful than the last. Wonderful writing Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 8:49:00 PM
You've got mail.
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Date: 5/8/2009 8:24:00 PM
A lovely string of words that you so elegantly put to paper here Raul, true poetry!
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:11:00 PM
Absolutely awesome, Raul! You bring a delightful melody to each season. Together the tenor, bariton, falsetto and soprano sing in amazing harmony. I bow to the master of the Choka. Love to you!
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Date: 5/8/2009 4:18:00 PM
Love the musicality of this, Raul! You not only bring the seasons to life, but I can hear each instrument as you describe it. Wonderful! Donna
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Date: 5/8/2009 1:33:00 PM
this is great and touches points of nature I like it
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Date: 5/8/2009 1:16:00 PM
If you could only enter your own contest you would win hands down! Wow this is absolutely amazing! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:40:00 AM
Who babbles nonsense from the keystrokes of a borrowed computer...Raul, that is a powerful statement you left on my blog..pure fire.
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:30:00 AM
You are amaster my friend and your words and writing skills just bloom everyday like a well watered plant..much respect.
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:13:00 AM
yes very vivid!!! great choka!!!
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Date: 5/8/2009 10:49:00 AM
If I close my eyes, and picture your words coming to life....I can hear the music! ;)
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