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Pyar Ka Ehsas

PYAR KA EHSAS suni si wo jindagi , jisme na koi chah aur na wo pyar ka ehsas badte rahe jindagi me,jis trah kaat rahe the hum jindagi ek ichha hui kisi ko pane ki hum ho jate pichhe , shayd na mile hume par mil gyi wo khusi ,jo umid na hume khusi hui, pyar ka ehsas hua us din lga hume mil gyi manjil, par thi meri khusi do pal ki chali gyi khusi humare daman se khusi na mile ab hume dobara un khusi ke palo ko man me bsa rakha hai ab na aur khusi ki ichha hai hume ab unhi khusi ke palo ko maan liya puri jindagi apni

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Date: 6/10/2013 1:32:00 PM
beautiful piece of work ...........
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Date: 6/9/2013 9:42:00 PM
a wonderful poem and message... Linda
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Date: 6/8/2013 12:22:00 PM
Love is a beautiful thing, it is more like a baby, it takes time to concieve her and watch her grow. Your piece is good, I wish to see you improve by the day...especially in your structure! I love the flow of thought. You are such a budding talent! It's great to read your piece this evening Vangita, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke.
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Date: 6/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
Sangita ,a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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