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Puter Problems

My puter is broke This is no joke My window to the world is blackened and closed My wallet is broke This is no joke My ability to fix my window is froze My optimism is not broke This allows me to joke My creativity still flows through pen and ink

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Date: 2/22/2012 9:20:00 AM
good attitude....yeah I need to go to the grocery store....my wallet is empty but i dig deep into the freezer and find a treasure....a whole chicken cut into pieces. soup is on tonight....hehe
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Date: 2/9/2012 9:50:00 AM
ahhhh....the optomist...glass half full !! May your puter be fixed quickly !!
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:54:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Bobb. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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