Put The Blame On Me

  

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Put The Blame On Me

Put The Blame On Me

You know better than anyone that, that you fail 
me, but that's alright - just put the blame on me.
The things that you promise, you soon forgot.
You know you betrayed me, knowing that no one
could love you, more than I.

Now go ahead and put the blame on me. Cover
yourself with my pain. tell them that you were not
to blame. I have a lot of reasons to despise you, 
but all I want is - for you to be happy.

When you get to the other world - instead of hell, 
I hope you find glory and a cloud from your memory
can forever erase me from your mind. Yes - you can
put the blame on me - if you think, that can set you free...





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Jeremy
Martin




Date:
3/27/2013 9:27:00 PM









"Cover yourself with my pain". Yes, I can feel the anguish in this one. It resonates so well.








			









		

			











Leonora
Galinta




Date:
3/24/2013 4:59:00 AM









This is a stunning write my dear friend. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poems. By the way, I also want to greet you a belated happy happy happy birthday last 18/3/ am I right? I've read it from your comment to our dear friend Anne Lise' poem. I wish you all the best and happiness that life will bring not only on your special day but on the years ahead! Big hugs and love lots, Leonora








			









		

			











Anne
Currin




Date:
3/23/2013 1:39:00 PM









Wow, this is reaaaaally deep, I absolutely love it. Breath taking piece, Lucilla, thank you for sharing. And also, thank you for your kind words on my most recent piece. :)








			









		

			











Michael  J.
Falotico




Date:
3/23/2013 5:48:00 AM









Deep piece my poet friend.. we write from places few see .. The gift is to put the words down .. And that you did... I did a poem a while back called "Where's The Blame"  you may like it.... xxxx Michael







				

					

						



Lucilla
Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2013 12:24:00 PM







I will chek it out.

					
				
			









		

			











Anne Lise
Andresen




Date:
3/22/2013 1:13:00 PM









- You may be a strong person Lucilla, but do not take other people's blame on your shoulders. - A very well written but sad poem. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)







				

					

						



Anne Lise
Andresen
Date: 3/22/2013 4:05:00 PM







- Happy birthday Lucilla!!!!!!!!! -

					
				
			









		

			











HOLLY
MOORE




Date:
3/22/2013 9:45:00 AM









That's a heaven burden for that person to carry....Thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore








			









		

			











harry
horsman




Date:
3/22/2013 8:57:00 AM









this amazing poetry Lucy, and so heartfelt.








			









		

			











Donna
Jones




Date:
3/22/2013 7:08:00 AM









A poem from your heart others can relate too Lucilla.....powerful words...








			









		

			











Russell
Sivey




Date:
3/22/2013 5:36:00 AM









Wow, this is a very powerful write, an amazing poem you have written! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this morning! What a masterful poem here Lucilla, a wondrous write, Great Work!!