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Put the Blame On Me

Put The Blame On Me You know better than anyone that, that you fail me, but that's alright - just put the blame on me. The things that you promise, you soon forgot. You know you betrayed me, knowing that no one could love you, more than I. Now go ahead and put the blame on me. Cover yourself with my pain. tell them that you were not to blame. I have a lot of reasons to despise you, but all I want is - for you to be happy. When you get to the other world - instead of hell, I hope you find glory and a cloud from your memory can forever erase me from your mind. Yes - you can put the blame on me - if you think, that can set you free...

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 3/27/2013 9:27:00 PM

"Cover yourself with my pain". Yes, I can feel the anguish in this one. It resonates so well.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2013 4:59:00 AM

This is a stunning write my dear friend. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poems. By the way, I also want to greet you a belated happy happy happy birthday last 18/3/ am I right? I've read it from your comment to our dear friend Anne Lise' poem. I wish you all the best and happiness that life will bring not only on your special day but on the years ahead! Big hugs and love lots, Leonora

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/23/2013 5:48:00 AM

Deep piece my poet friend.. we write from places few see .. The gift is to put the words down .. And that you did... I did a poem a while back called "Where's The Blame" you may like it.... xxxx Michael

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2013 12:24:00 PM

I will chek it out.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2013 1:13:00 PM

- You may be a strong person Lucilla, but do not take other people's blame on your shoulders. - A very well written but sad poem. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2013 4:05:00 PM

- Happy birthday Lucilla!!!!!!!!! -

Holly Moore

Date: 3/22/2013 9:45:00 AM

That's a heaven burden for that person to carry....Thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/22/2013 8:57:00 AM

this amazing poetry Lucy, and so heartfelt.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/22/2013 7:08:00 AM

A poem from your heart others can relate too Lucilla.....powerful words...

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/22/2013 5:36:00 AM

Wow, this is a very powerful write, an amazing poem you have written! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this morning! What a masterful poem here Lucilla, a wondrous write, Great Work!!