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Pushing the Envelope

With the unlikely proposition that winter would end
	green tips took


             beneath the softening crust of snow around the

	box, a

collage congealed by road salt and sand
               buried the early dream of spring in 

	granular mass 

My slippered feet sank muddying the soft 
           sheepskin leather. Joggers pushing the envelope
	as well

people the curb

cutting to the heart of the matter
	springing forward with a rabid desire to bloom.

*I printed out Charlotte's contest direction and cut out the first word
in each of these lines. 

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  1. Date: 3/30/2014 6:25:00 AM
    I saw the poem title and related to the - now very topical (annual) tax-form-party(?) over here with people "marching" with their blue envelopes being able at last to push their envelope..... but focusing on the beginning of spring is a much better idea.. Glad I read your poem which guided me to a much nicer exit... and noticing a poem written with superb craftsmanship Dutch greetings Elly

  1. Date: 3/29/2014 10:29:00 PM
    I love how you did this....makes a lot more sense than mine I think..:-)

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 3:04:00 AM
    Very original Debbie,thank you for your welcome comments on my Vivaldi Phrasis.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 9:47:00 PM
    Oh, so you are allowed to do it this way?(Of course you are 'allowed' .... I mean, for Charlotte's contest, specifically). Either way, you are doing a good job, pushing the envelope with this piece.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:49:00 PM
    This sounded like too much hard work for me but you have done it beautifully. I see a winner here. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:12:00 PM
    Deb, Your style here has me thinking and thinking is good.. Mind if I give it a try soon?

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 9:28:00 PM
    A unique approach to writing. Impressive.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed the form Debbie, it's nice to get out of our comfort zone and you do it real well, luv xxx

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 6:44:00 PM
    How fascinating!!! A rabid desire to bloom is what I loved most about this, Debbie....