Pushing the Envelope

With the unlikely proposition that winter would end
	green tips took

form

             beneath the softening crust of snow around the

mail
	box, a

collage congealed by road salt and sand
               buried the early dream of spring in 

a
	granular mass 

My slippered feet sank muddying the soft 
           sheepskin leather. Joggers pushing the envelope
	as well

people the curb

cutting to the heart of the matter
	springing forward with a rabid desire to bloom.




*I printed out Charlotte's contest direction and cut out the first word
in each of these lines.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/29/2014 10:29:00 PM
I love how you did this....makes a lot more sense than mine I think..:-)
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:04:00 AM
Very original Debbie,thank you for your welcome comments on my Vivaldi Phrasis.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:49:00 PM
This sounded like too much hard work for me but you have done it beautifully. I see a winner here. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 9:28:00 PM
A unique approach to writing. Impressive.
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Date: 3/13/2014 6:44:00 PM
How fascinating!!! A rabid desire to bloom is what I loved most about this, Debbie....
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