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Pushed To Limits

I was pushed to the limits my thoughts were disturbing was i orchestrating a path of distruction i had no mercy for folks who crossed me were folk so confused about me had i been keeping a score card all these years was i a ticking time bomb was i planing a suicide mission or did i just want to out shine them one more time was i dead serious or just burned out of life would this be a bad scene or the worst scene you have ever scene was i indulging my depraved mind or was it i am a ticking time bomb was i out of my mind was i completely out of control would you ever think of me again would i go to heaven or hell Bang it was over folks were crying and asking why what went wrong with me folks say i was a loner and a outcast always keeping to his self i left a note that they read no one going to push me around no more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/1/2012 2:20:00 PM
Be strong Bradley. Very good poem, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Bradley Cox
Date: 10/1/2012 7:22:00 PM
Thank You, it just came across my mind have a awesome week

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