Pursuit

her feminine wiles catch his gaze across the room his lashes curtain is it possible? his coyness intrigues her more? she longs to know him she inhales, exhales she gives herself a pep talk who is this creature? her approach is slow a smile dances on her lips is it in his kiss? written by Diana-Marie Bomardieri January 09, 2012

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/9/2012 5:19:00 PM

This is an amazing poem! I absolutely loved it! Always, Laura

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2012 12:02:00 AM

Diana-Marie, here's your first lesson on poetry. You have a fine ensemble of verses presented. However, these entries should be classified as senryu poems. A senryu poem describes human qualities where haiku poems describe things in nature. Nevertheless, these are impressive writes.

Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 1/11/2012 10:21:00 AM

Hi Robert, nice to meet you:) Thank you so much for correcting me:$ I don't really know much about poetry so any & all help/suggestions are welcomed!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2012 11:28:00 PM

Diana, wow~... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2012 10:31:00 PM

ooh la la. This reminds me of when I first met my hubbie!! I watching him during a dance as I moved in for the kill!! (and yes, I too long for a saner yesterday PRE- IPHONES!!) Welcome to Soup!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 12:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Diana-Marie. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/10/2012 11:20:00 AM

An enchanting poem, Diana. Very romantic.I love it. -Mohammad