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punched in face by fist in face

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punched in face by fist in face

errrr strings burst from sirens
lights strobe in our ears blinding us
i can hardly listen to speaking mumbles
a heavy bass resonates between us
down another drink upside down
yeah thats quite entertaining to millions
not so funny on your own

ooppps punched in face by fist in face
blood falls out of face that has been punched by fist
blood from face falls on floor fist removes from face
placed down by bodies side

night ends on sticky floors
fight ends before it began
light comes on 
get out get out
homeward bound i headed
alone again naturally
another great night some would say

my head will not agree with my stomach in the morning
neither will its contents

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  1. Date: 5/7/2010 8:10:00 PM
    well done a very interesting write, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 6:56:00 PM
    I couldn't help notice that the category for this poem is Happiness. I was just wondering if punching someone in the face caused happiness, or if getting punched in the face made you happy? If none of the above, just ignore the rambling comment altogether. Chris.